Tuesday, November 06, 2007

I am a doorknob

The other night, I was made my niece and nephew write a story with me. I was the scribe and I alternated between the two of them for sentences. I think it turned out pretty well. I think I might take this down to Cup of Joe's for the big poetry slam. I could kick some literary asses.


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I am a ninja turtle. I am really tough. I am a princess. I'm not really a ninja turtle but I always wanted to be one. I'm not really a princess, but I really want to be one. I am really nice and a really tough girl. Yesterday, I got a costume. I help people when they drop something--even if they don't ask me to I still help them. Help others. I will be really kindd to people. I am a bad guy. I am the bad queen. I am a door. I am a doorbell. I am a doorknob.

4 comments:

  1. Yes, this is one of the best poems ever. It could definitely win a slam contest.
    Nice work!

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  2. I feel this is a metanarrative of your life and I want there to be audio and/or video of when you go slammin.

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  3. I like the variety of labels on this post.

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  4. W.S. Merwin, 1973:

    This is a place where a door might be
    here where I am standing
    in the light outside all of the walls

    there would be a shadow here
    all day long
    and a door into it
    where now there is me

    and somebody would come and knock
    on this air
    long after I have gone
    and there in front of me a life
    would open

    Melissa's niece and nephew, 2007:

    I am a door.
    I am a doorbell.
    I am a doorknob.

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